hyperlinks in Persuasive Essay

these are some of my links so i can answer most of my questions in my essay!


http://data.bls.gov/PDQ/servlet/SurveyOutputServlet
http://data.bls.gov/cgi-bin/surveymost
http://www.givingandvolunteering.ca/reports/1997_g_and_v_PQ/page05.asp
http://www.givingandvolunteering.ca/reports/1997_g_and_v_PQ/page03.asp
http://www.lexdon.com/article/philip_morris_companies_inc._helps/56228.html
http://www.informationclearinghouse.info/article4305.htm

Writer's Moment

I am a very well rounded student who can write any fictional story to the best of my abilities and I can do very well when using a beginning of a sentence to make something entertaining in the end. I'm not very good when it comes to real writing, like doing a column in a newspaper or trying to write a report on something because I don't find any of it very interesting.

I want to know that my class can be respectful to whoever is talking and that my skills in writing will improve with my vocabulary and grammar. So when I do write my stories that they will be well understood and accepted with many different audiences, not just one who would read it then say, "that was good," and never mention it to anyone else.

Freewrite: Personal Essay

I would like to end all of world hunger one step at a time with the help of everyone since that's what it would take. Everyone helping and using there knowledge for the people around them instead of being lazy and not wanting to pay out the fees for people who do live here and deserve the pay in order to live in this country. illegal immigrants don't help since they would work for nothing and then the benefactor gets more out of the deal. but since our country depends on a cash flow we should work to keep it that way. with the people around us. Now on the opinion of the people who have people work for them that aren't in anyway suppose to be here but are. i don't find a problem with any of this but i don't understand why the people without jobs should suffer because others will work for less even though they can't even buy food with it. but they will work the jobs and do what ever their boss tells them. so now i think its time that people take a stand and quit hoarding because their greedy and should give to the people that are less fortunate then them. it would take the help of everybody in order to make this a realistic possibility around the world. third world countries need the same help as other but it seems nobody is willing to lend out a helping hand. out country is large and very wealthy so i don't see why we can't help those who need it and have a medical help that would save many lives of those on the streets begging and being humiliated because they use to be somebody. the same could happen to anyone of us if we're not careful but people are still greedy and don't care what other people feel just as long as their reassured that their well taken care of and that it isn't happening to them. sad isn't it? that we can't just pull together as the nation that we're suppose to be and do some thing for others that would make a very big difference in this world and remarkably make it a better place. its amazing how many friendships the United States would make if we would make the effort to know other countries or just the other people in the countries and we say we're a strong country just because of the fact that we have the technology to destroy anybody else, but in numbers isn't one stronger? i think so and because of this to help another country in need would help but not like we are now. you may be thinking that we are helping out Iraq and that's the same thing... no not really. since we aren't even taking care of our people over there. there is to many explosions and to many fatalities to even thing that its close to my idea. i want to help others yes but not to the risk of lives, which is certainly happening right now. people are dying and people are injured no medical practice is really done and nobody is in work to promote the wealth of the country. isn't that a problem? if we started in our own country to stop any of hunger here and became an actual nation of wealth then lets make it possible to help other.