Wednesday, December 19, 2007

My Interpretation of Seamus Heaney's "Bog Queen"

"Bog Queen"
She awaits in her eternal sleep for now and forever beneath the peat and moss, waiting to be unearthed by the unsuspecting traveler or peat cutter. Creepy crawlers crawl all over her while other water animals make her body useful by putting their spawn around and in her. Animals and other things come and chew and eat her. While she seems calm, even peaceful towards the world who bound her in the ground.
Her body waits through the winter than she is robbed of all she had and then buried within the the bogs once again. Still she waits until some one unearths her sickish body from her would be eternal tomb. There she sits on the bank of the bog with her body torn and disheveled, for the people to figure out her story.

Tuesday, December 18, 2007

My Interpretation of Seamus Heaney's Antaeus

Antaeus



Seamus Heaney starts this poem by playing as Antaeus who has much strength and is feared by many people who seek to gain immortal fame. Talking to those who would or could overthrow him, even though he would just be reborn and start all over again until the next hero comes along to fight him. He seems to be depressed for living for one and only one thing. He seems to be a bit arrogant in his profession. Making sure that nobody can gain some kind of princely reputation till they go through him.

He lies in wait until the next person comes along. Speaking to those who wish to gain splendour. Saying that he is their enemy and that they will have to defeat him first. He seems to rest in nature until the time comes when he is to be lifted and to fight, then to return back into the earth until his services be needed again on the next stranger.

The speaker seems to be all powerful and a little wary of his situation. Preying on the unsuspecting for a match in the ring. (I'm thinking of wrestling) Antaeus seems to have no worries and only lives for the day.

Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Monday, December 3, 2007

Toothpaste Essay

Rebecca Holman

Persuasive Essay-Toothpaste

Advanced Composition

14 November 2007

Toothpaste

By: Rebecca Holman

Toothpaste tubes were designed to be squeezed from the bottom. When you squeeze a toothpaste tube from the middle, toothpaste goes everywhere in the tube, leaving a mess that makes a person squeeze from the bottom sooner or later because there is not any left in the top half, instead of starting at the bottom of the tube like most of the population does.

Some think it’s easier to clutch the toothpaste from the middle or top of the tube, but many are not getting the full money’s worth of the toothpaste that the consumer just had to buy. Just because it may look easier does not mean that it is beneficial depending on the budget that a consumer has to work with. Thinking about how much a consumer spends on food, clothing, and other miscellaneous items, and then adding to the account of buying more toothpaste that the customer had bought not to long ago is shocking. This could lead to a large expenditure after awhile depending on how much your favorite toothpaste cost.

Buying toothpaste all of the time because you squeezed from the top or middle, seems like such a waste of funds, when the money could have been used on different necessities for daily life. This maintains the full benefits of the toothpaste and provides minimum spending on wasted toothpaste. Using all the toothpaste a consumer buys, expensive or inexpensive, should last anyone awhile instead of useless spending. Examples like; the buyer threw away the tube of toothpaste because the paste stopped coming from the top half of the tube, when there is still paste at the bottom.

Being easier to squeeze from the bottom to the top, helps out many of the population, who have a hard time and don’t like to waste toothpaste or are elderly and have a hard time squeezing the tube as it is and just want to brush their teeth.

A small child gets toothpaste all over because the young person does not know how to handle the tube right yet and is taught to squeeze from the bottom instead of the middle so the toothpaste can go all over the place because the kid does not have a good enough grip on the tube yet. Squeezing from the bottom would give the child a better grip and be able to hold his or her toothbrush while putting the toothpaste on the brush.

Toothpaste also comes out of the tube easier when squeezed from the bottom with a small satisfaction when you brush your teeth and know that you did not have any problems, especially if the consumer is not a morning person and can have a bad day if the smallest thing goes wrong in their morning routine.

Everyone take the stand and squeeze the toothpaste tubes around the world from the bottom for the sake of the elderly and the children who have not learned yet quite how to squeeze the toothpaste out right without making a mess. This also ensures the buyers of the product to quite paying all the time when they do not have to.

Thursday, November 29, 2007

Tradgedies and Mishaps

Rebecca Holman

Short Story

Advanced Composition

7 November 2007

Tragedies and Mishaps
By: Rebecca Holman

A loud shout with the shattering of something made of glass resounded from some place in the house waking Damion from his drunken slumber. He pulled himself out of bed with a start, pulled on a tunic, and made for the entrance hall to see what the racket was about. His mother stopped him with soft words, “My son it is alright, the cook just dropped a punch bowl from the cupboard.”

He looked at his mother for a moment. “Oh, well have one of the maids bring me a glass of wine please, and I’ll come dine with you.” He held his head trying to make the dizziness leave by sheer will and hopefully look as if he had not been drinking all night.
“Yes, do that and wash up while you are at it. Your father has requested that you have lunch with us, and I would be grateful if you stay away from the wine until you leave this house.”
Damion smiled, hoping that she wouldn’t see the pain behind his eyes from the pounding in his skull. “Yes mother.” He walked back to his rooms.

After Damion's bath with colognes and different herbs to take the smell of wine off of his skin he went into the peristyle and sat on a beautiful couch opposite of his father and looked at the murals depicting a famous scene of Poseidon, the sea god, creating the horse from nothing. Damion took a grape and popped it in his mouth. “Good morning father.”

Rashid looked up from the accounting books in his lap. “I see that you’ve been getting useless baubles for the people of Athens when they need food, clothing, and building materials for the poor!” he said with a bitter calmness that grated on Damion’s already shot nerves.

“I make a fair pay, and Athens is happy with the cargo that I bring them,” he replied back with the same manner of bitter calmness, knowing that a fight was already underway.
“You will do as you are told!” Rashid yelled at his son with black furry in his eyes. The people of Athens needed food and not useless luxuries for the wealthy.

“I will bring in what I want, since they are my ships!” Damion shot back at his father with the same, black, look in his eyes. Since his father didn’t understand that what the people wanted, they would get.

Shala sat by quietly on her couch next to her husband listening to the conversation between them, wanting to cry out for them to stop, but knowing it would do her no good. Their fighting had gone on since Damion had made his first talent from the ships he had borrowed from his father, the same ones he now owned by right. She got up slowly and bowed to her husband, “I am going to go and make my offering to the gods. Please don’t do anything rash.” She stared at her son in such a way that he looked down at his hands.

“Yes, mother, I need to meet with some people before the ship comes in tomorrow. Excuse me, Father.” He stood up and watched his mother leave the room and then made his way to the stable where his horse waited. As Damion walked out to the stables and heard the neigh of Akema, an Arabian horse from a trade with one of his drinking friends, coming from the corrals. He deviated from his path to the stable and made his way to the corrals to see why she was in there.

“Stable man, why have you put my horse in the corrals?” he yelled to the gentleman watching Akema running circles and tossing her silken brushed, midnight black, mane.
“She needed to run, sir, and I did not know if you would be coming out today to ride her.”
Damion looked the man over and returned his gaze to his horse. She continued to run a little more and then made her way to him as though she knew he was coming for her. Akema nuzzled his face, and he gave her some clover that he had gathered on the way to the stables.

“Get my bridle and saddle. I need to go and see a friend. I think she would enjoy a change of scenery,” he commanded the young man still staring at the horse with wonder.

“Yes sir,” and the stable boy jumped off of the wooden gates and ran into the stables to retrieve the items that his master had commanded of him. He brought out the saddle and Damion took it from him so the boy could go back for the bridle. Damion saddled Akema and jumped onto her back. “When I come back, be sure that her stall is cleaned and some oats are awaiting for her also a brush so I may brush her down.” The boy nodded his understanding and left to work immediately. Damion smiled after him and clicked his tongue to make Akema trot down the road towards Trave’s home.

Coming up to Trave's main gate Damion saw him running out to greet him, “Ah my friend! Come to see me so soon? I was hoping you would grace me with your presence, since I’m to have a grand feast tonight to honor Athena.” The man had his arms wide open with a glass of wine in his hand to show greetings in a warm manner towards Damion. Many rings covered the man’s fingers which made them look like small sausages. Damion looked the man up and down. Trave's expensive tunic looked ragged because he had slept in it the night before, and was a little tight around his stomach because it was beginning to bulge from too many delicate foods and too much wine. His face showed the same characteristics of pudgy cheeks that use to look handsome, but now looked pig-like from his expensive living style. Damion didn’t go into the man’s arms to receive his warm welcome, but stood there looking at him with disgust.

“I have come because I need to speak to you about business, not because of your party."
Damion scowled at him and walked into the court yard letting the stable boy take his horse. He gave her a pat and watched her go until the boy turned a corner. Damion returned his gaze to Trave. He made a smooth gesture up to the house. “May I come in so we can speak together?” he asked with icy politeness.

“Yes, of course you may come in. I’ll just call for some food and wine, but please make yourself comfortable.” Trave trembled a little as he walked into the peristyle and called his man servant to tell the cook to prepare a tray with meats and some wine for two. The wine came first and then the tray of delicacies that Trave liked so much. Trave picked one up, admired it with his beady, pig eyes, “Well, what would you like to know?” Trave asked and quickly started talking, then babbling on how he had been cheated out of his money because of the gambling he had been doing. Damion soon put up his hand to still Trave's senseless chatter about how nobody cared about his financials.


“I have come because I have a shipment coming in tomorrow, and I need to know if your going to pay me what you told me you would for some silk and other items we have spoken of.” Damion coolly sipped his wine and watched Trave’s outward reaction to his comment.
“I would gladly pay you, but right now I’m a little strained for money as I've told you. I owe other people some money and was wondering if you could help me get out of debt. When I have the money I owe you, I will repay you.” Trave gulped the rest of his wine and looked at Damion with sad, frightened, eyes of what the he would say.

“I will not give you a cent! How dare you intrude on my courtesy with a plea for money when I have given you money aplenty in the past and all you do is gamble it away!” Damion's eyes showed fire from his anger and burned straight into Trave’s eyes. “I’m leaving, now!” He got up and made his way to the door where the man servant bowed to him and opened the door. His horse was brought to him, and Damion got into the saddle with one fluid movement and galloped off. Back at his parent’s house, he told the servant to serve some wine and wash his road-dusted feet. The girl came and did as he commanded. While she washed his feet and laced up his shoes, he drank steadily and felt himself calm down with each gulp.

He started to reflect on what he had done at Trave’s and knew that he had been unwise by his outburst of anger. Trave had the ear of many people in power close to Pericles, the ruler of the land, and could have almost anyone killed just by blackmailing them. The wealthy usually tried to pay him off just so he would keep quiet about the business that went on in court or elsewhere that the common people should not know about. Affairs that developed at certain parties that he attended; a time in court when somebody who was innocent was sentenced going to die; any kind of juicy gossip that could get men in trouble with wives or the democracy.

These thoughts went through Damion’s mind for a time, and he knew by tomorrow he might be thrown into a dungeon or hanged for all the people to see. He took another drink of his wine, and ways of escaping this death came to him. He knew that if he stayed in Athens, he could very well be in a noose by tomorrow morning and have no more neck before the sun hit its highest point in the sky. His ship wasn’t going to be coming in until tomorrow morning, not leaving for about week as it gathered up gold and other rich fabrics, certain animals for slaughter, and slaves to take over seas for the markets. He kept pondering these facts until he remembered that a ship was leaving tonight after dark!

He got up and stumbled to his room. Finding a piece of paper and a pot of ink, he wrote to the captain of the ship and informed him that he would be joining their exploration and that no one needed to know that he would be going. Damion sent for the messenger boy, who took it and went down to the docks to deliver his master’s message. Damion packed a few belongings and wrote another message to his parents telling them that he would be leaving and would like to send for them when everything calmed like the sea after a storm and he thought it would be safe. He donned his cloak and made a hasty pace down the road towards the docks.

“Left, right... left, right, left! Forward men we must catch the traitor before he thinks of some way of escape!” the captain of the guard yelled to his men with spear in hand, ready to kill whom ever got in his way. Damion froze for a moment listening to the man encourage his men to continue marching towards their destination. He stood his ground for a moment longer, and knew that his family would suffer if he wasn’t found or seen by the soldiers. He stole to the side of the cobbled road and waited for the soldiers to pass. The last row went by and he walked to the middle of the street. I must be a fool for doing this!

“Hello, captain of the guard, whom are you looking for at this late hour?” Damion yelled in the direction of the soldiers, who all stopped in unison and turned around to look at the stranger who dared to stop and ask them questions. The captain of the guard trotted through the ranks to the new front of the line to see the stranger.

"That is not any of your business. How dare you ask questions of us." The captain of the guard took out his short sword ready to hack the stranger down because of his imprudence. Damion looked at him for a moment and recognized it was Alcander, a great friend in Damion's time of need, specially when he drank to much and needed a way to get home.

"I am just wondering who it is you seek so late at night because I saw someone run down this street and make a quick turn into an alley. He looked as if the dogs of Hades were after him." Damion kept his face hooded and pointed to the alley opposite him.

"Why would you tell us this peasant?" The captain of the guard came up and grabbed him by his cloak.

"I thought... I thought maybe I could get a small amount of money," Damion stammered, trying to sound frightened and hungry at the same time. The captain of the guard let him go and yelled at the rest of the soldiers. "Split up! Part of you go down that alley, part of you go up to the home. The rest of you will explore the opposite alley," he bellowed to the soldiers. They broke up into equal sections and marched off in unison towards their destinations with a clacking sound from their hobnailed sandals.

Damion looked at the man from under his hood and sized him up. He knew there was going to be a fight, and he didn't want to be the loser of the match. He just needed the captain to know he was the one he sought and his family wouldn't get hurt. The captain turned back toward to Damion. "Well, there you go, I suppose you'll be wanting your money, you filthy beggar?"
Damion stood there a moment and waited, getting as much breath as he could and unsheathed his small dagger without Alcander knowing that he had done so. "No I do not think I will need the money. I have plenty of my own, you see. I just needed to get you alone." Damion took his his dagger from under the cloak, and the captain took a step back.

"What is the meaning of this?" The captain's short sword was at the ready as he got into the familiar stance of a seasoned warrior who was ready for a fight to the death.

Damion lowered the hood so it pooled between his shoulder blades against his back and took the stance of a novice fighter. The captain stared at Damion for a moment and then cried, "it's you! Damion come in quietly and we can get this straightened out. You know Trave, he always gets angry with small things and tries to kill off the people or at least get them jailed for a time until his anger is appeased. I promise you that you won't face the noose or any public humiliation if you just come quietly." The captain spoke in earnest, hoping that the youth would listen to his words and change his mind about dying.

"I know Trave also, and I think he'll try to pull every string he has to make sure I die. I'm just making sure that my family won't suffer for my insolence and die in my place. But now you see me, and there will be no need for such a thing to happen."

The warrior looked at him with the a affection, a father might have for a son who finally showed his value and knew that he could not sway him from his current path. He lifted his sword, saluted Damion, and readied himself for the fight. Damion looked at the captain with an admiring gaze and took the first plunge with his dagger. The battle did not last long. Alcander soon fell to the ground with the dagger protruding from the his chest. Damion looked down at Alcander and saluted the captain. "Even in death may you be triumphant."

Noise from the soldiers coming back to report to their leader started to echo everywhere around him. Damion looked down one last time at the dead soldier and began to walk away from the grisley scene.

Damion ran the rest of the way to the docks towards the ships. The men were close behind him and seemed never to slow, "I am Damion son of Rashid and Shala here to sail on this ship. Let loose the lines for I'm in pursuit! The sailors worked quickly and accurately as Damion ran on the plank that led onto the ship, which started to take off slowly from the calm bay.

Soldiers ran onto the docks and some jumped into the water after the boat, hoping that they could make their way on and were never seen again, the rest of the soldiers yelled and cursed after the ship. Damion looked out at screaming soldiers and sat down heavily on the deck, breathing with his lungs on fire from running so hard. He looked at his hands and saw blood stained them a horrible rusted color with flecks of red from the blood that hadn't yet dried.

Later on that year his parents were hung for every Greek to see the shame that the family had brought upon itself for their only son to run away for a crime that he had committed. Damion heard about all of this from a traveler that had seen the deed carried out by the executor's own hand.

"Why do you ask these things of me stranger? Were you not there?" The weather beaten face looked at the cloaked figure for some sign of acknowledgement.
"No, I have been on this ship for a long time and have had no news of Athens for we have been traveling to different areas and resting when cargo is put on board." Damion said in a low voice, hidden underneath his cloak, waiting for some question that he could not answer because it might give away his identity. The traveler just looked at him and then looked back out at the beautiful blue of the sky in contrast to the sea.

"I am sorry for what has happened to your parents Damion, and I am ever sorry for the cruel task that I have to carry out too. Hades is waiting for you and the gods do not like to wait when someone is suppose to die and somehow escapes!"

Damion's eyes widened with fear, and threw his hood back, "how do you know who I am?"
The traveller laughed at him, "why do you not know who I am? I am Hermes, the messenger god of all mighty Zeus, caretaker of Apollo's sacred cows, and escort of the dead to the river Styx who await Charon to ferry them to Erebus and into Hades."

Damion stared at the god in amazement, "but my friend, it is now time for you to leave this world, for you were suppose to die, and the gods do not like to be cheated out of what is theirs to take. So I am here to escort you down to the River Styx, after I have killed you." The god raised his shepherd's staff for the killing blow.

"wait, please wait oh merciful Hermes! Have mercy on me for I still wish to live on this earth." Damion bowed his head and knew that the fates would have their way no matter how it happened and that his parents sadly had died in vain for his foolishness, but he wanted so desperately to avenge their deaths because of his ignorance of the gods' plans. I must be crazy as into try and trick a mighty god. Maybe it would be a good death to die by the hand of god instead of a mere mortal.

"I will die by your hand all mighty Hermes, but please let my family be in the Ephesian Fields, for it was my insolence that led to there shameful death. I wish to bare the weight of both of their sufferings into the being of eternity, since it was my fault that my parents were hanged in the first place."

Hermes looked at the youth wondering if he was trying to trick him or if he was being truthful in every sentence he uttered, "I will make your wishes known to Lord Hades, for it is your fault that you turned coward and ran to save your own neck. Though I admire it, I do not approve of you abandoning your family. This will all be so and now you must die." Hermes raised his staff over his head and came down as hard as he could over the youths head, who fell to the floor of the deck with blood making a small pool around him from the gash in his skull from Hermes mighty staff.

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Top Ten vocabulary words

1. bauble: A showy but useless thing.

She had a very pretty bauble made of porcelain sitting on the buffet.



2.Opulent: Rich, luxurious; wealthy

He lived in very opulent conditions with jewels on his fingers and eating delacacies that nobody else could afford.



3.Deviate: To turn aside from a course; to stray

Cindy deviated from her current course in the huge labrynth because she came to a dead end.



4. Obloquy: Strong disapproval; a bad reputation resulting.

By marrying the man of her dreams she brought obloquy on her self and was the talk of the town.



5.Sadistic: Deriving pleasure from inflicting pain on others.
Her brother was very sadistic when he picked on the poor bird that had been tortured by the cat.




6.Perfunctory: Done witout care; in a routine fashion.
The maid did everything in a perfunctory manner from making the beds in the morning to preparing afternoon tea in the afternoons.


7.Besmirch: To make dirty; To stain
Gale's reputation was besmirch because she played a prank on a fellow classmate that failed misserably and people made fun of her instead.


8.Rectify: To correct; to make right.
Mother tried to rectify herself for yelling at the child for being late from school because she didn't know that he had detention.


9.Hedonism: Pusuit of pleasure, especially of the senses.
The romans likded hedonism a lot since they lived in comfort and slaves did their bidding.


10.Debacle: Complete failure; a total collapse.
She felt very debacle because she had studied hard for the test and ended up with a lower grade then what she hoped for.

Cliche's Transformed

1. After all is said and done: When you have your say and then suffer the consequences.



2. Believe it or Not: Have faith or walk away.



3. Better Late then Never: Don't give up even when you think its hopeless.



4. Easier said then Done: Make it look easy when you take action rather then talk about it and do absolutely nothing.



5. In a Nutshell: Summarizing everything you just said.



6. Lesser of Two Evils: Picking an angry bear over the hungry dragon.



7. No Time Like the Present: Wait for the Crops to grow before you pick them.



8. See Eye to Eye: Our minds think that we are right.



9. Sink or Swim: spill the rocks from your pockets or it will hurt more with every step you take.



10. So Far so good: No one has come knocking on your door with bad news yet.

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Writer's Moment: Personal Review of Persuasive Essay

My persuasive essay was created to encourage those around us to understand how the homeless suffer and how that we should get up and help even though we don't think its our job to do so. We don't always have to leave these problems to the government to solve even though we think that's what we should do. For there are people who use their time for others and only think of how to help the people in need. When will we all just stand and tel how we feel on a subject such as this even though its easier to just leave everything unsaid like everyone else does.

I believe that everyone can make a difference since we are the ones who made our country the way it is. Through all the turmoil of when America was settled and the wars break out. We still have survived and now a somewhat minor thing will pull us to our knees if we let it. All it takes is one person to have the thought,"How can we make this nation better and how can we do it?" So what will we do to change this world a little at a time? I think we could start with the people who live here and work for what they have when they can.

Persuasive Essay

This Nation Needs Help!
4.6% of America’s population is currently out of the job! Today, many charities are helping out the homeless; there are still to many problems with the population of people on the edge poverty for their efforts to be enough. This nation needs everyone’s help. What are Americans doing to help? Some are doing nothing, but others are standing on both of their feet every day to help out in soup kitchens. When others stay in the comfort of their homes cooking dinner for the family and waiting till their spouse comes home.

The poverty rate of our country is growing at an alarming rate and is becoming overwhelming. 41% are single males who are put out of the job, 41% are families, 13% are single females who may have toddlers, and 5% are unaccompanied minors in 1996 by the 1996 National Survey of Homeless Assistance Providers and Clients and now those numbers have doubled in size. All of the percentage rates will to continue to grow if nothing is done by the government and the everyday people of the country. Since the homeless population accounts for 50% of African Americans, 30% white, 12% Hispanic, 2 % Native American, and 1% Asian, and all types of ethnicities living in the streets and count on homeless shelters in order to survive each day.

Charities and homeless shelters like Daystar, Catholic Charities, and St. Vincent DePaul are doing their best to help out the poor every day, it is still not enough. They provide shelter and food for people who cannot get food stamps or social security because they do not fit the precise profile the government sets aside for the people who are unemployed and need assistance in order to go on living semi comfortably. Places like America’s Second Harvest, which is dedicated to ending hunger and starvation see hundreds of people every day, yet the numbers of people keep growing with each passing year. Making it noted that if you don’t have a college education, finding work is very hard and many people are ending up on the streets because of it.

But not all of the homeless are “lazy” and do nothing at all. Sometimes they are unfortunate and the economy makes it hard to live with a job that cannot support them at the cost of living continually rising. The people who walk pass the poor without even a word of kindness keep their money and other resources to themselves when they could be improving the growing poverty rate just by giving a donation to local charities that help the poor. Others say that the homeless do not work or pay taxes, so why should those who hold a job help out some one who is idle. The homeless are people to and need help like anyone else in this country. “Treat others like you would like to be treated,” teachers say to us in grade school and now how are you treating the people around you?
Charities are giving to the poor while many of the wealthy still think nothing is wrong and try to ignore the on-going crisis. They continue their lavish and comfortable lives with little or no consideration of others’ suffering. While others go hungry and rely on charities in order survive every day. I mean think of how good it feels to show others that you care by standing behind the counter ladling the daily ration to a person that has nothing but the clothes on their back and asks how you are and letting you know that you are giving back to the populace instead of only thinking of yourself. Put yourself in another’s shoes that might not fit right because they were given to you by a generous lady who saw that you had no shoes of your own on your feet and your stomach is rumbling because you have not made it to the soup kitchen which is still two blocks away.
Rebecca Holman
Persuasive Essay
Advanced Composition
2 October 2007

Writing Sample

Fiction

She sat outside her house thinking about the dress she would wear tomorrow when her fiance walked up the steps to her porch. "Oh, dear I have great news! we'll have the reception in that beautiful garden you love so much." He exclaimed invigoratedly. "Thats lovely, I can't wait till tomorrow."
She put her hand on her chest in all the excitement and remembered something her father used to say, "things that you get in this world comes from hard work, if they land in your lap then its strange like fiction, and you should do well not to except them." He told her over and over till the day he died and she would always sit there, nodding her head, until he drifted off to sleep.
The wedding day set, she glided down the aisle in her white, silk, dress studded with diamonds. They were joined in holy matrimony and made their way to the handsome reception they were going to have in the canopied garden with all it's fragrant, smelling, buds in bloom.
They danced until the moon showed it's milky surface in the blue, black, star studded sky. All of a sudden the Earth quaked beneath them and the wedded couple stopped dancing to see what was wrong. The ground shook more violently than before, as if in a wave, and he was just about to draw her to him in a protective manner when one of the beams from the canopy broke, hitting her on the head. She dropped dead in his arms. He looked down at her, "this is like fiction," and wept over her.

Friday, September 7, 2007

Writer's Moment

I am a very well rounded student who can write any fictional story to the best of my abilities and I can do very well when using a beginning of a sentence to make something entertaining in the end. I'm not very good when it comes to real writing, like doing a column in a newspaper or trying to write a report on something because I don't find any of it very interesting.

I want to know that my class can be respectful to whoever is talking and that my skills in writing will improve with my vocabulary and grammar. So when I do write my stories that they will be well understood and accepted with many different audiences, not just one who would read it then say, "that was good," and never mention it to anyone else.

Freewrite: Personal Essay

I would like to end all of world hunger one step at a time with the help of everyone since that's what it would take. Everyone helping and using there knowledge for the people around them instead of being lazy and not wanting to pay out the fees for people who do live here and deserve the pay in order to live in this country. illegal immigrants don't help since they would work for nothing and then the benefactor gets more out of the deal. but since our country depends on a cash flow we should work to keep it that way. with the people around us. Now on the opinion of the people who have people work for them that aren't in anyway suppose to be here but are. i don't find a problem with any of this but i don't understand why the people without jobs should suffer because others will work for less even though they can't even buy food with it. but they will work the jobs and do what ever their boss tells them. so now i think its time that people take a stand and quit hoarding because their greedy and should give to the people that are less fortunate then them. it would take the help of everybody in order to make this a realistic possibility around the world. third world countries need the same help as other but it seems nobody is willing to lend out a helping hand. out country is large and very wealthy so i don't see why we can't help those who need it and have a medical help that would save many lives of those on the streets begging and being humiliated because they use to be somebody. the same could happen to anyone of us if we're not careful but people are still greedy and don't care what other people feel just as long as their reassured that their well taken care of and that it isn't happening to them. sad isn't it? that we can't just pull together as the nation that we're suppose to be and do some thing for others that would make a very big difference in this world and remarkably make it a better place. its amazing how many friendships the United States would make if we would make the effort to know other countries or just the other people in the countries and we say we're a strong country just because of the fact that we have the technology to destroy anybody else, but in numbers isn't one stronger? i think so and because of this to help another country in need would help but not like we are now. you may be thinking that we are helping out Iraq and that's the same thing... no not really. since we aren't even taking care of our people over there. there is to many explosions and to many fatalities to even thing that its close to my idea. i want to help others yes but not to the risk of lives, which is certainly happening right now. people are dying and people are injured no medical practice is really done and nobody is in work to promote the wealth of the country. isn't that a problem? if we started in our own country to stop any of hunger here and became an actual nation of wealth then lets make it possible to help other.